Wednesday, September 03, 2008

untitled


untitled my life fades
unheard my voice fetters
lost in millions
costing in penny
untitled my life fades

utopian visions i once had
life has crushed 'em all
sweet dreams now
ugly thorns
life has crushed 'em all.

6 comments:

Priya said...

Why is it always sad Kaushik?

I love these lines:

untitled my life fades
unheard my voice fetters
lost in millions
costing in penny
untitled my life fades

lessthan6degrees said...

Although you and my son are of different cultures, you are both passionate men who love to write and can convey emotion in your writing. That's the reason that I read your post for comparison.

Resonator said...

wow..beautiful beautiful..nice one!

happy blogging
Prema

Parv Kaushik said...

@priya

the poem was written by me a long time ago... probably when my exams were approaching and u knw this is how sad i fell about my exams!! lol

Parv Kaushik said...

@6degrees.. thnk you mam for saying so...

and do give me the blog address of your son's blog it will be nice to read him!!

and comparison?? i guess m just too novice!!

Parv Kaushik said...

@resonator thnk you!!!!